my 4900 char. stanford essay

<p>Anyone want to read my first draft of the long stanford essay? I used the quote one. Its very rough, but I desperately need suggestions and feedback to make it better. Post in this topic, and I'll PM the essay to you straightway!</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>

<p>I will, also.</p>

<p>ill read. (10 char)</p>

<p>I can help</p>

<p>i'll be willing to read</p>

<p>I will read if you need more help ( :</p>

<p>anyone else willing to help?</p>

<p>i'll read it.. don't worry me coppying becuase i finished my essays.</p>

<p>I will be willing to read.</p>

<p>i'll read it too</p>

<p>ill read it. don't worry i applied scea</p>

<p>i will do it too.</p>

<p>i ll read it</p>

<p>i will read, if you need more feedback</p>

<p>BUMP BUMP BUMP</p>

<p>PLZ I need help.</p>

<p>lol you still need more feedback?</p>

<p>pm it to me if you still need some help</p>

<p>I can give you my help aswell!</p>

<p>you seem desperate.. i can help =)</p>

<p>I'll read.</p>