<p>I've started writing my application essay and it is reading like an informative essay instead of a narrative. All of the example essays I've read have been narratives or at least had narrative-like introductions. That isn't like me and it's not the way I write. (I intend to major in chemical engineering to give you an idea.) The prompt asks me to elaborate on an experience that would help the committee get to know me better. I am writing about karate, and how it has changed my life and made me a leader. Is it okay that I don't have anything like a narrative story in it? I want it to be a good essay but I also want it to sound like me. Any advice is welcome. Thanks!</p>
<p>I’d say going too far off from your style of writing isn’t good because you must express in your identity. However, if it’s about karate and how it made you a leader, I don’t know how good or bad it may be just on the fact that it’s not a narrative. I suggest you ask some more experienced people around here to read it.</p>
<p>Quick . . . what’s your favorite book? I guarantee whatever book you choose, it contains wonderful dialogue that grabs the reader’s attention and propels them into the story. It’s the same with short stories and films. </p>
<p>One element that always seems to be missing in college essays is dialogue. May I suggest starting your essay, or at the very least including bits of dialogue in it. That will help to create a story, make it less of a strict narrative and focus your reader’s attention on specific details that only you could tell.</p>
<p>You can google many great articles about how to use dialogue in your college essay. Here’s one of them: <a href=“http://www.juststartapplications.com/blog/entry/how_to_use_dialogue_in_your_college_essay”>http://www.juststartapplications.com/blog/entry/how_to_use_dialogue_in_your_college_essay</a></p>
<p>have your teachers ever told you “show, don’t tell”? Telling someone is never as engaging as showing them through a story. You want your reader to be engaged, right? Let your teachers look it over. They may be able to give more specific advice.</p>
<p>Karategirl slow your roll. There’s plenty of people out there just like you. Check out getsmart.org - you can download an e-book (free) there, that has a sample essay for each of the 5 common app.'s questions this year.The first essay in the packet is from a student who wrote about “leaf cutter ants”. I think this may give you some insight and inspiration. Writing about karate is going to make for a great story! Keep fighting!</p>
<p>Writing a great essay about sports is incredibly difficult. Most fall into the trite twist of overcoming adversity and coming back from a setback to win the big game. Others attempt to show … leadership. </p>
<p>Since you express doubts about the style, chances are that your essay is just as bad and common as almost all such essays. </p>
<p>Pick a better subject! And do NOT follow the above advice to use it or ask teachers as few are understanding college essays. Stick to a small slice of life and keep it simple and personal. </p>