<p>hey guys! im almost finished writing my common app main essay, it's about my struggles with math and what i've gotten out of it. i have yet to start the conclusion so could you give me a few tips on how to end my essay? and criticism on the essay itself, too? all will be much appreciated, thank you SO much! :) Just ask me for a PM :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I’ll provide the best feedback I can, feel free to PM me. I am looking for people to help with my short answer too :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>i’ll read it :)</p>
<p>A tip: after you write the first paragraph (showing a starting point), you should then immediately write the final paragraph (where you want to end up), showing a better, stronger, wiser you. If you take this approach, the middle should be easy and remain focused! You know the start and the end… you just need to show the transition. This will keep the focus, help you stay within the word limit, and make for a concise, on-the-point essay that will grab attention AND show how you dealt with an obstacle (math) and overcame it.</p>