<p>Hi, I'm trying to get into some top schools. Right now my common app essay has 700 words and answers the prompt--
Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story-Please critique my essay, suggest some places i can shorten the essay, and evaluate if it answers the prompt effectively. I'm concerned about it being too cliche so please be honest. I'll pm it to you if you ask.</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>Thanks. Ill pm it to you tomorrow when I can get on a computer</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you’d like. I don’t read essays very often but I’m sure I can help you in some way or another !</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give you feedback</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>I appreciate to read it!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it!</p>
<p>aye aye</p>
<p>I’d be happy to proofread it.</p>
<p>Sure! You can send my way. I can also send you my common app essay from last year.</p>
<p>Same here. I can edit if you still need help!</p>