I don’t even know what he means, someone please read my Uchicago essay. I’m an intl
Have you ASKED him what he means?
He’s your counselor; his opinion outweighs that of a bunch of strangers-- most of them kids-- online.
But if I were an adcom, looking to admit college students, “Childish” would NOT be what I was looking for.
His very very conservative. And extremist @bjkmom
But his job is to offer you advice, based on his experience on past essays.
As opposed to the vast majority of people on this site, who themselves are high school or college kids.
is this the “white as a cracker” essay? 
I’m betting he means it would be funny to children. Not many ad coms are children.
Private school, may I guess?
Eaaaasy theere @lostaccount I came back to CC to find all my old ass threads replied to by you, and showing on the discuss page. Please don’t do that at a go, I almost had a stalker heart attack.
To answer your question.
No.
Less than a month old…calm down.