My Essay-Columbia,Duke,Georgetown

College Essays
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<p>Whats up guys/girls... I was thinking about revising my essay and I would like some input on it! I designed it to fit columbia's prompt and used it for my ED essay (i wish i would have made this post before but i didn't know about this forum). i was thinking improving it before submitting it to other schools for essay prompts that are almost identical/really open ended. Its an about a kid from Iraq that I met while on a program to Egypt with the department of state. its in the narrative style so you may even find it interesting, especially if you are as bored as i am right now.</p>

<p>Possible Problem-----
possible weak point is the conclusion, i had a longer one but it was a bit trite so i made a shorter (too short?), more sophisticated conclusion</p>

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<p>o yes and please dont ask for it unless you are serious about it (i.e. you will have time to read it well/give it some thought and actually respond)</p>

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<p>is it one? If there is only one essay then send it to me. I don't have enough time to read essays for all the those colleges that you are applying to.</p>

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<p>your essay should be perfect
specially introductory and conclusive part
essays reflect your thoughts and act as your mirror
so they better be really good
if you will pm it to me
i could help you</p>

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<p>"your essay should be perfect" a little intense there aren't we....it will never be perfect...because we are imperfect beings.</p>

<p>Shoot it over.</p>

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<p>yes it is just one essay...thanks!</p>

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<p>pm it -- I can give it a look, if you still want.</p>

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<p>i'll read it for you</p>

<p>give feedback</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>I'll read it, just pm me.</p>

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<p>what is the essay prompt for columbia state university ?
HELP!!!</p>

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<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM!</p>

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<p>Guys…this thread started in 2006.</p>