My essay is basically just a strange analogy - anyone want to read?

<p>I'm worried it doesn't portray my message properly, anyone willing to give it a look?
i'd also be willing to look at some of yours</p>

<p>bumppp? anyone?</p>

<p>Yes, I would love to. </p>

<p>PM me, and I will give you my email address.</p>

<p>yeah, i could take a look at it
pm it to me</p>