My essay is complete, but I'm not sure that I've done it right

College Essays
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<p>Does anyone care to have a look? I've yet to trim it down, so I'd love suggestions on how I can go about doing that. Thanks in advance :)</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>sure, PM it to me</p>

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<p>I'll look over it if you'd like.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to take a look</p>

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<p>yea, ill definitely take a look if you want.</p>

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<p>sure, PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read!! PM me</p>

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<p>Yeah sure PM it over.</p>

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<p>PM me, but i'm in class of 08</p>

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<p>Send it on over, if you like :)</p>

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<p>I can critique it for you.. PM me</p>

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<p>PM me, but I am in class of '08</p>

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<p>PM me if you want!! (class of 08)</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it, just PM it over! Already in college, no worries there.</p>

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<p>i'll read it!</p>

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<p>PM me, I'd help</p>

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<p>I'll take a look if you still need more opinions. PM it to me :)</p>

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<p>I'll help you with it</p>

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<p>Can anyone else help me with this? :)</p>