my friend said my essay was boring and cliched... i don't know what to do now. help!

College Essays
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<p>I'll PM you my essay if you want. Please tell me what is wrong with it!</p>

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<p>Send it over if you want. I may or may not offer constructive criticism.</p>

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<p>Ask an adult you know personally if you can (not a high school friend). Can you ask an English teacher?</p>