<p>Okay so when I handed in a college essay for english class, which I rushed through in one night, my teacher gave me a 100%... obviously not a trustworthy critique. And no matter what I write, my mom seems to hate it sooooo I was hoping that someone, anyone could look over my essay and offer some tips, suggestions, etc. I'm desperate!</p>
<p>so what if your mom hates it. This is YOUR essay, not your mom’s. Do what you think is right.</p>
<p>I’ll look at it. Does this mirror a debate you are having with her as to what type of school or program you prefer? Maybe that is at the heart of the matter.</p>
<p>send it to me by PM and i will respond</p>