<p>Ok, I just wrote a personal essay..who wants to read it and critique it? Any helpful advice/honest criticism would be greatly appreciated! Thank you!</p>
<p>sure send it over.. im sure your life has some excitement in it</p>
<p>Sure, I'll read it over. I am basically trying to finish most of my normal deadline ones right now and polishing them as well since I want to send them in tomorrow or Wednesday.</p>
<p>My life is pretty boring also, maybe I could give you some tips of how I made mine sound better. =/</p>