My masterpiece for UC, friend commented "it's godly", anyone willing to read?

College Essays
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<p>saying “I’m not applying to any UCs” is almost as trustworthy as saying “I graduated last year”.</p>

<p>Anyway, generally people with a higher post count are more likely to be serious.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I wanna see how good it really is</p>

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<p>Please reply back guys, I want critique</p>

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<p>^ Try sending it to more people like me. We may be applying to the UCs but that doesn’t mean we want to sabotage you or anything. It’s a big system.</p>

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<p>Hey, I’ll help too if you want to PM it to me.</p>

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<p>pm me and i’ll read it</p>

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<p>For full disclosure purposes, I am applying to 4 UC’s. However, I already wrote my essays (I’ll let you read them if you woild like to take a look)</p>

<p>I want to read yours! PM them! :)</p>

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<p>Chances are, I’ll rip it apart. PM me if you want.</p>

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<p>ill read and critique
PM me</p>

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<p>Not applying to anywhere remotely near California (Minnesota doesn’t count, methinks), so you can PM me and I’ll read it, if you’d like.</p>

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<p>PM me and i will read.</p>

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<p>hah… godly, hit me with it, if you don’t mind the criticism.</p>

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<p>PM it to me, I’ll judge if it really is godly.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it ))</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PM it over</p>

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<p>pm it to me nd i will read it and give honest feedback:)</p>

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<p>PM it to me … I’ll take a look =)</p>

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<p>pm me I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>@Pretty-Girl - Graduating senior at Cal here. PM me. It might take me a day or two to get back to you as I’m in the middle of a 20-page seminar paper as well as completing a revision to my honors thesis at the moment. I’d be happy to give my input.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>