My masterpiece for UC, friend commented "it's godly", anyone willing to read?

College Essays
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<p>Not applying to UC because im OOS</p>

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<p>Please PM, I’ll do my best to offer good advice.</p>

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<p>While I am at it, is there any way to track whom you PM to? cause I PM a bunch of people and only a few replied…</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. pm it over.</p>

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<p>i’d be incredibly interested to read a godly essay</p>

<p>and then kick its ass</p>

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<p>PM it to me</p>

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<p>Internatioanal student here and I would love to read it! PM me</p>

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<p>PM me, I’d love to read such a godly essay haha</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Ok I will help you out but tell me if it is the first prompt or the second. Make sure you hace a catchy beginning.</p>

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<p>I corrected all the mistakes now, it’s even better. Anyone willing to read and give critique?</p>

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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I’m a '14er and I am applying to Berkeley (international student), but I’ll happily read and critique it for you if you wish.</p>

<p>Perhaps you could critique some of my essay for me as well?</p>

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<p>PM me this godly essay</p>

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<p>“godly” wow, its that good huh?
i bet ill be able to find something wrong with it.
send it over =)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll critique it too.</p>

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<p>Godly…I thought we left that title for “God” a long time ago? oh well PM me i’ll read it, west coast is not even in consideration</p>

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<p>you don’t need an amazing uc essay to get in, even for uc berkeley regents. go do something else more productive with your time.</p>

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<p>I’m not applying to any UCs. I’d love to give it a read.</p>