My Supplement Essay

<p>Could someone read my “Tell us about an intellectual experience, project, class, or book that has influenced or inspired you” essay ?
I would appreciate if it was an ED applicant or someone who already applied :slight_smile:
I know it’s a little too long but just tell me what do I need to change about it. I was stressing over it for almost a week but I worte it in less than 3 hours, and if you could also check my grammar and punctuation I’ll be grateful I’m kind of an international applicant.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>i’ll read it (accepted ED)</p>

<p>Great already sent it ;)!
Thanks</p>

<p>I’ll gladly give you some critiques</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’ve applied RD</p>

<p>I’ll read. I was accepted ED.</p>

<p>Can anyone read mine as well?</p>

<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>

<p><em>sigh</em> I already sent mine. So pm if you still want someine to read.</p>

<p>someone* …</p>

<p>Thanks Wethepeople & Ayia! I just sent it to both of you.</p>