my weakest Columbia University Essay-i need harsh critique

College Essays
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<p>I am applying ED to Columbia and am struggling with my weakest essay-why Columbia.</p>

<p>It is also probably one of the more important ones...argh.</p>

<p>Anyway, it is imperative that this essay is strong and clear and decisive.</p>

<p>Can someone please read it over and let me know how it is?</p>

<p>Please reply/PM me!</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>I can read it if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read</p>

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<p>sure, i’ll give you a harsh critique.</p>

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<p>i am willing to read it and give you feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>!!! Pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll edit for you!</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>I will read it!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it, just send me a PM.</p>