My weakest essay; rip it apart before the admissions committee does?

<p>My Harvey Mudd app is due Thursday, and I don't feel great about my "Why Mudd?" essay. It would be great if someone with a bit of essay reading experience could give me some constructive criticism.</p>

<p>I can PM you with the essay, and will read any of yours. (After the 15th, probably. UC apps, anyone?)</p>

<p>Ok, I will take a quick read, PM me including the writing prompt.</p>

<p>Okay. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>