I need someone to look over my UC essay. I could read yours too if you want!

College Essays
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<p>Feel free to PM me. My essay's pretty cliche, but I tried my best to make it different from everyone else's. It's essay prompt #1: Describe your world. I took it from my common app essay and tweaked it just a little bit. I guess I just need help trying to adjust it to fit the UC app. PLEASE BE BRUTAL.</p>

<p>If you need me to look over your essay I'll be willing to do it!</p>

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<p>scong, you’re in the exact same position as me. Im trying to use my common app one, and i’d be happy to read it if you’ll read mine. PM it to me and i’ll PM you mine</p>

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<p>Send it over! Can you look at one of my supplements?</p>