national youth orchestra-usa essay prompt help?

<p>hi everyone,
i am a cellist applying to this year's nyo-usa and i was wondering if there was anyone who was willing to give feedback on my essay.
thank you!</p>

<p>Hey, I was one of the oboists in NYO-USA last year. I’d be glad to take a look at it for you.</p>

<p>@oboefiend‌ thanks! i’ll pm it to you</p>