Need a college essay peer

[asianabomination]

<p>Hi! I'm looking for someone to review my Common App essay for me! My English teacher isn't exactly being the most productive person in the world and he hasn't reviewed my essay, let alone ANY of my classmates' when we all shared our individual essay with him. So I figured I would attempt to seek help here. I'm doing Prompt #2 (the failure prompt). Any feedback would be appreciated. Thank you in advance!</p>