Need a good grammar check. Can't be read by parents/teacher

<p>And you can critique my writing above the grammar. I just really want to make sure there are no silly grammatical errors because I am sending this to my top school.</p>

<p>So I wrote an essay about something pretty personal and I do not really want my parents or English teacher to read it. I don't care if a stranger on the internet or a college adviser reads it though.</p>

<p>I guess I could email you or do a google document or PM you the essay, it is only 500 words. Just tell me how I should get it to you.</p>

<p>I’d be more than happy to take a look :]
Shoot an email.</p>

<p>Be careful. If your essay is too personal for your GC to read, it is very likely that it is inappropriate for a college essay.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it</p>