<p>This essay corresponds to the first prompt of the common app essay questions. I've spent a good deal of time revising it and I think it is pretty good, but of course I'm biased so I'd be very grateful if an experienced member of this forum could take a look at it. Thanks :)</p>
<p>bumppp</p>
<p>pleeeeeeeease i need a reader!</p>
<p>i got you. <a href="mailto:mes404742@student.lths.net">mes404742@student.lths.net</a></p>
<p>2nd reader here…</p>