Common app prompt #1 -- readers needed

<p>Hi everyone!</p>

<p>I am considering redoing my whole essay, but I'd like some opinions first.
I would love to have someone (preferably not still in high school -- no offense!) read my common app essay and tell me what you think. Thanks! </p>

<p>i can help read it if you’d like, even though i’m still in high school</p>

<p>Well, I’m certainly not in high school if that counts! Please send it over and I’ll give you my thoughts.</p>

<p>sure, i’d help, PM me</p>