Need critiques on my UC #1 and #2 essays!

<p>Can anyone critique mine? I really need hardcore and honest feedbacks. </p>

<p>Only 13 days until apps are DUE! OMG!~</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>PM me your essays. I would be happy to read them.</p>

<p>Im happy to read yours. But Im a 09err . I can read both of your essays, can you read one of mine? XD</p>

<p>i'd be glad to read your essays</p>

<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

<p>Happy to read =] Pm it to me.
I know the DEADLINE soo soon.</p>

<p>Sure! I would love to read it over and provide you some good critiques! Pm it to me..
Yeah, I know the deadline is approaching and I am so not ready to submit my applications! =/</p>

<p>i would love to read your essay. PM me</p>

<p>I can read it =]</p>