Need Desperate Help on Writing

<p>Hey guys so I have a huge problem. I cannot seem to raise my writing score... at all! In fact it just keeps going down!
so here are my scores from the BB:
Test 1: 39 raw
Test 2: 39 raw
Test 3: 32 raw
Test 4: 35 raw
Test 5: 32 raw</p>

<p>How is this happening?!?!?!? And there's more! In the beginning when I was relying mostly on my ear, instead of the grammar rules when it came to the time, i was doing extremely well. But now, when im paying attention to the grammar rules and my scores are getting progressively worse, I keep going at least 3 minutes over. And to make matters even more interesting, I've been steadily improving on the Writing portion of the PSAT... my scores jumped from a 52 to a 66 to a 70. </p>

<p>I just don't know what I'm doing wrong. I've been using the sparknotes grammar to help but apparently it isn't helping at all....</p>

<p>what do you guys suggest I do? Is there hope for me?</p>

<p>thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Learn the grammar, go over mistakes, and practice.</p>

<p>^ yeah. thats the advice i’ve been getting. but it doesn’t seem to be working. Ever test i review my mistakes and I’ve been going over the sparknotes grammar. and practicing with these tests. and NOTHING seems to be working. </p>

<p>should i just start doing the writing sections out of prep books? would that help?</p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>In what times did you take these tests?</p>

<p>If you took one test each the past few days, maybe a break/rest will improve your score :)</p>

<p>^ i’ve taken these over the progress of my summer. but i guess i have been craming in a lot of tests lately… because i’m kinda frustrated with my results…</p>

<p>but i dont think thats the real cause of it. i just have no idea…</p>

<p>When you’re frustrated you tend to not focus on the question. You want to rush through the test to prove that you’ve improved from last time, only to find that you’re making more mistakes. That’s what happened to me.</p>

<p>Take a little break, and then try and take another test without worrying about how you do.</p>

<p>the thing is that I dont think its just because I’m frustrated. I think that something is wrong with my strategy. Because like I said, on the first few tests, which i took in June I got like a 39 raw score. And I was just listening to the sentences and choosing what “sounded right” relying only on my ear. But now I’m using the grammar rules more than actually using my ear. Is this a good or bad thing?</p>

<p>And also how long is a “little break”? a day? a week?
thanks</p>

<p>I think you should write down next to every answer choice the reason why it’s wrong (when you’re reviewing). I did that and it helped significantly.</p>

<p>i think i had the same problem for CR. My bad of reading i think</p>

<p>Yeah, frustration can really lower your score. You want to take each test without an unconcious urge to think too much on questions, especially in writing in which it is VERY easy to convince yourself something is wrong when it’s right, or right when it’s wrong.</p>

<p>As for using ear vs. grammar rules, I usually use both. I’m in the habit of checking the rules automatically (what is that pronoun referring to? Is that clause where it should be? Should the verb be singular/plural?), but of course, I depend on my ear and inner gut to fix things like “In 1929, the ship will sail” :P</p>

<p>@motivated_101, if you could post a concrete example or two of a question you are getting wrong when you apply the grammar rules, I’d be glad to take a look at it, and think other posters would also. You could modify the actual examples by replacing words with the same number, case, tense, etc. (as applicable) so that you’re not directly copying the examples, in case there is a copyright issue. I’d have to guess that there is some aspect of the grammar rules that is confusing, or else the rules you are applying don’t actually hold for the cases to which you are trying to apply them.</p>

<p>Why wouldn’t you <em>expect</em> your scores to go down temporarily?</p>

<p>Between birth and now, you’ve read a certain amount of “written English” and it has given you an “ear” for the language that is not perfect, but is reasonably good, right?</p>

<p>But your skills at applying explicit grammatical rules are not very good. At least, they’re not as good at your skills at figuring this out by ear. Did you expect that they would be?</p>

<p>When you started taking practice tests, you were using your reasonably good ear for the language, and you got reasonably good scores. But apparently you were not great at telling when your ear was failing you.</p>

<p>So now you’re trying to apply rules, not just on the questions where your ear fails you, but on questions that you would have gotten right if you’d done them by ear – and sometimes you are not applying the rules successfully. Well, your ear is better than your mastery of the formal rules, so your scores are going down.</p>

<p>What you need is to (a) improve your ability to apply formal rules, (b) let your mastery of the formal rules improve your ear, and (c) become skilled at telling when your ear is good enough. You’re already working on (a), and you don’t seem to be doing anything to see whether you’re accomplishing (b) or (c).</p>

<p>If I were you, I’d start working problems twice. First, by ear. (I would also keep track of which questions I wasn’t sure of, when I was doing it by ear.) Second, trying to figure out the answer by applying the rules. I would time myself both times, but I wouldn’t stop when a certain amount of time had elapsed. I would then look at my scores from the first time through the test and see whether <em>those</em> were improving compared to the ones I had taken by ear. I would look at my scores from the second time through the test and see whether <em>those</em> are improving compared to when I started studying grammar. But comparing scores from the second time through the test to the scores I’d obtained operating on instinct before I started studying grammar wouldn’t tell me much that was useful.</p>

<p>In addition to going through explanations of grammar followed by practice sentences, I would, of course, also be practicing using the rules of grammar that I was learning on sentences that just came along: any that someone happened to say that struck me as interesting (and because “spoken English” uses different rules, people will happen to say an awful lot of sentences that are good practice for “fixing” using rules), or any that were complicated enough that I came across when reading skilled writers. (Actually, I do this now, just to improve my mastery of “written English.” It helps.)</p>

<p>Then when my test date approached, I’d look at whether I was getting better scores doing everything by ear, doing everything by applying the rules I’d learned, or doing things by ear but then applying the rules to the sentences I wasn’t sure about. I would also look at roughly how many questions I could afford to apply rules to without running out of time. Given that information, I would choose a strategy that seemed to offer me the highest score achievable in the time I was allowed.</p>

<p>But no, I wouldn’t feel at all desperate if my scores were going down as I began to learn and use a new method. I would expect that to happen.</p>

<p>Great set of suggestions, nontraditional!</p>

<p>yeah thank you very much nontraditional!</p>

<p>The ones you got wrong, go over them and copy the entire question in a separate notebook. Write the mistake you made and the correct answer. Also write the grammatical rule (subject-verb agreement, parallelism, etc).</p>