Need help editing and reviewing Penn essays

College Essays
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<p>No 09ers.
I'd like the reader to be as frank and harsh as possible please :P.
It's a common app topic.</p>

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<p>PM me,I will tell you my initial reaction to the piece, if it helps</p>

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<p>hi. pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>