<p>I've just finished the 3rd draft of my first college essay and I could really use some editing help. The essay is for one my lower choice colleges, but I plan to use parts of it for the rest of my essays. If you're interested, I'd appreciate it if you could state what year of high school/college you're in (if applicable). Thanks in advance,</p>
<p>I’ll read yours if you’ll peek at mine. I’m a senior in high school :)</p>