<p>Would someone mind reading an essay I wrote?</p>
<p>For an online college prep class we were supposed to do applications and essays, so I was wondering if someone would just mind reading mine. It's kind of a first draft, not entire well thought out, but I'd like to know your opinions and what exactly I should be doing more and less of, just to get an idea of when I do the real thing.</p>
<p>PM me if you are willing to do so!</p>