<p>Ok so my biggest problems is leaving space and i leave a lot of it , i leave about 5-7 lines empty yea like a whole paragraph can some one tell me what i can do because if i extend my conclusion out too long i just start repeating things and that will detract from my score. So can someone tell me how to expand my essay and where exaclty should each paragraph be in regards to the two pages like 2 paragraphs on the first or three and etc.................</p>
<p>you really don't need a complete two pages. even if they say the score is related to length it isn't always.
I've completely used my paper, with a full conclusion both times and ended up with an 8 and a 7.
You're better off working on examples.
I do think handwriting helps too though.</p>
<p>Start your intro light and interesting, don't insert any heavy weight material into it. I always start mine with a broad generalization and then narrow it down to my thesis. Sometimes, you might want to briefly mention the two view points. </p>
<p>For body paragraph, use the model . " Point, example and explanation" or " point, explantion, exmaple than go back to your point again." This method is really a filler and gives some kind of structure to your essay.</p>
<p>For each body paragraph, establish a topic sentence, and in the end, write a short concluding sentense and if u can, smoothly tranfer to the next paragraph, using words ' in addition, on the contrary, etc"</p>
<p>for the conclusion, try to repeat your idea in diferent words, recapticulate your 3-4 main points, than write the last sentence as if to open up a new topic. </p>
<p>Yeah , hope this helps.</p>