Need People to Read/Critique My Columbia Essay

<p>PM it over.</p>

<p>Sorry no sen10rs.</p>

<p>ill critique it =]</p>

<p><a href="mailto:jodi_mao@hotmail.com">jodi_mao@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>No Sen10rs sorry :(</p>

<p>EA to Stanford here. I’d be happy to help you out :)</p>

<p>Im not ■■■■■■■■.
I did a post check of your posts.
You want to apply ED to Columbia.</p>