<p>I wrote an essay, for CommonApp, a topic of my choice where it describes my passion and interest in various sciences</p>
<p>Does this seem like an OK topic to write? And would anyone be willing to review my essay? I am getting so nervous right now :x it's october, only a few weeks left to send everything in (applying to Cornell Engineering ED)</p>
<p>Please send me a PM if anyone is interested. I get the feeling it's just an average essay and I need all the help I can get. thanks!</p>