Need some critique on my CA essay...Stereotypes/generalizations.

<p>Need some feedback on my Common App essay...It's about 750 words and the topic is how stereotypes/generalizations about my home country are metaphors for aspects of my life.
Let me know if you can read it.</p>

<p>BUMP…please help me out.</p>

<p>Bump10char</p>

<p>send it. can u read mine too?</p>

<p>Sure, send it to me.</p>

<p>BUMP, please help me out.</p>

<p>Sure! 10char</p>

<p>Thanks, BUMP.</p>