Need lots of feedback on Common App Essay!

College Essays
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<p>I need some critiques on my CA essay. I'll swap if necessary.</p>

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<p>Bump. 10char</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>Bump 10char</p>

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<p>Bump 10char. Anyone?!</p>

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<p>i can read em, pm me if you still want my feedback/corrections.</p>

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<p>Swap with me! The fking deadline is comin' and I'm quite clueless about what my essay really is.</p>

<p>Send an pm with your essay. I'll send back!</p>