<p>I just finished my first college essay and was hoping someone could read over it and give me some suggestions. After working on an essay for a while it's hard to get a fresh perspective on it so I was hoping you guys could help me out. PM me if you're interested.</p>
<p>im 08 but if were not applying to the same places ill do it</p>
<p>bump...Anyone else? Please help me out, I'm really interested to see how people who don't know me at all react to my essay (opposed to peers or teachers reading it).</p>
<p>I'll read it. But I'm an 08-er, but I'll critique your essay.</p>
<p>Parent here...PM me your essay if you'd like me to look at it.</p>
<p>Ill do it also just let me know im a freshman in college</p>