Help! I need somebody...to read my common app essays, please?

<p>I'm sending in EA apps next week and I really need help because my English teacher was too busy to read my essay. I just need a few readers to tell me if you hear voice and if the flow and style are good. HELP!!!
Please no 08s or 09s, though no offense.</p>

<p>please, please, please. i only have a few days.</p>

<p>im 08 although i suspect we're applying different places</p>

<p>tell me where ur applying. if im not applying to any of the same ill read it</p>

<p>I'm also an 08. I am willing to help critique your essay if your not too paranoid. Also, I already have an specific essay idea developed and am not looking to steal anyones essay just get a idea of what some other people are writing. so PM me, if you want.</p>

<p>I'm a parent...with kids in college. PM it to me if you'd like.</p>