Need someone to Critique my Essay

College Essays
1

<p>Hello all,</p>

<p>If anyone is kind enough, I need someone to please help me with my UC essay prompt #2. It's my first draft so there is likely plenty of things to be picked at. Let me know and thank you for the help.</p>

2

<p>Sure, PM me.</p>

3

<p>I sent you an e-mail to your yahoo account, thank you so much! Anyone else?</p>

4

<p>I’m down, PM me</p>

5

<p>Thank You, if possible, can you guys give me an e-mail address because there’s a character limit on PMs, thanks again!</p>