<p>I'm not sure if the theme of my essay (as in if it's significant or positive) and the level of focus is right - the language itself right now is minor and can be made more artful later, but does anyone want to read my essay? :) I'm applying to Yale SCEA most likely.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>sure, I’ll look at it. graduated HS in June.</p>
<p>I can take a look. No connection with Yale, but im currently a grad student at Upenn looking at doctoral programs at Yale.</p>
<p>Sure I’ll look at it PM please!</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me :)</p>
<p>I’m applying to Stanford SCEA, so PM if you want me to critique it.</p>
<p>ill read it if u want some extra input just PM me</p>
<p>PM me, i’ll take a look at it</p>
<p>I’ll read it . :)</p>
<p>I’m apllying Yale SCEA as well, an dif you’re not intimidated by this, I’ll gladly read it (and for the record, I’ve already written one 
).</p>
<p>Wow. yale:))</p>
<p>PM me!</p>
<p>Sure. Feel free to PM it.</p>
<p>I’ll look at it. PM.</p>
<p>I’ll have a look. PM me</p>
<p>sure send it :)</p>
<p>Yea sure I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’ll help out! Full disclosure: Class of '09.</p>
<p>But done with essays.</p>
<p>sure i’d love to read it, pm it over!</p>
<p>love non generic essays</p>
<p>PM me if you want (I already graduated by the way)</p>
<p>I’ll be more than happy to read it if you wish.</p>