Anyone wanna critique my essay?

[xatuuatx]

<p>Hello all,</p>

<p>I just finished a draft of my common app essay. Anyone interested in reading it? It's an early draft. Still lots to do!</p>

<p>I'm applying SCEA to Yale. </p>

<p>Thanks</p>

[it_s.been.real]

<p>I’ll read it, PM it to me!</p>

[collegestudent1313]

<p>sure, send it over.</p>

[tristan101]

<p>I’ll read it and give some constructive criticism - Just PM me :)</p>

[the_pakalypse]

<p>ill read it over as well :-)</p>

[Bostonhotti3]

<p>I’d love to critique it, just send it here :)</p>

[eaten]

<p>sure, PM me! I might be brutallll</p>

[Flipper519]

<p>PM it over. I will read and critique.</p>

[sssgol]

<p>sure…i’ll read it too</p>

[highhopes2013]

<p>i’ll read it and comment. phd in psychology</p>

[karenoona]

<p>I’d love too, I’ll send you back a thorough review as well.</p>

<p>PM it to me</p>

[motivated_101]

<p>yeah sure i’d love to!</p>

<p>PM it to me</p>

[sssgol]

<p>yeah sure!!
send it to me!</p>

[athlete92]

<p>id love to help!</p>

[LiveLoveRun]

<p>I’d love to read it. PM it to me! :]</p>

[Code_H]

<p>why not. Pm :D</p>

[i_am_me]

<p>if you feel comfortable with it, sure</p>

[rusty999]

<p>PM it. I’d love to help.</p>

[Demiitasse]

<p>Me too, send it over :]</p>

[sopheng]

<p>ill make some suggestions! pm it over =]</p>