October 2010 Writing SAT thread

<p>OH f!!</p>

<p>Do you remember how that sentence that started with “Its” was worded? What was the answer?</p>

<p>I vaguely remember that. I can’t help you. Sorry.</p>

<p>What was the answer to the one that had people emphasizing…?
Was it* people’s emphasizing or people emphasizing*? If people were in its possesive form, then wouldn’t that sentence be no error?</p>

<p>Also what was the answer to this one. “Its settlement of the_____ showed that _____ while still making a profit”?</p>

<p>And what’s the question with had issued vs issued? I don’t remember that one…</p>

<p>"Only 1 No Error.</p>

<p>Writing was a joke…seriously, “would of”?"</p>

<p>hahaha I laughed when I saw that…</p>

<p>Hey Jenny did you get no error for the last question</p>

<p>Can anyone confirm that Gwendolyn Brooks was experimental?</p>

<p>“Its settlement of the_____ showed that the company could treat it workers fairly_____ while still making a profit”</p>

<p>I put NE but that’s wrong.</p>

<p>“while still making a profit” is wrong because it lacks parallelism</p>

<p>any other opinions about the</p>

<p>“in part” vs. “which is in part” question?</p>

<p>is there a consolidated list to the writing on any page or do i have to read it all to get the answers?</p>

<p>@Linger: Sorry I haven’t seen a consolidated list.</p>

<p>@Mabs: I think I put “in part.” Do you remember the full sentence?</p>

<p>why does everyone say wait for oct 23 when scores are coming oct 28.</p>

<p>So does everyone agree that there was only 1 no error?</p>

<p>and the no error was the last question</p>

<p>Can anyone confirm Gwendolyn Brooks was experimental?</p>

<p>which one was no error?</p>

<p>the indeed and by comparison one this confuses me…i put by comparison.</p>

<p>Ca someone elaborate on the “Its settlement of the_____ showed that _____ while still making a profit”? question?</p>

<p>What was the full sentence?</p>

<p>And was it people’s emphasizing or people emphasizing?</p>

<p>I might’ve gotten these wrong too! >.<</p>

<p>Gwendolyn Brooks may very well have been experimental, sorry for the confusion. I had an experimental writing, so that was probably it.</p>

<p>For the regular section, I had two As in the improving sentences and one E in the identifying errors (NOT the mammal one, I put that one was an error.)</p>

<p>I think the sentence was</p>

<p>"Running outdoors burns 10% more energy than running indoors [ See Below ]</p>

<p>,in part because of the air resistance ____</p>

<p>or</p>

<p>, which is in part because of the air resistance____</p>

<p>What was the answer to the tanning bed one?</p>

<p>Hmm, I remember another question besides the one about the company making profits that started with “Its”…
The question I’m thinking of was on the 2nd page of the Identify Errors section and middle of the 1st column. if that helps</p>

<p>Also does anyone remember how the sentence about the mammals was worded?</p>