October 2011 SAT International Writing

<p>@specific but that just as_so too was one of the improving sentences tho</p>

<p>nah. I was talking about the Error finding sections. Sentence improvement questions are good for me. At maximum, I get 1-2 wrong but Error finding questions kill me. </p>

<p>In addition, my essay wasn’t that great either.</p>

<p>i remember smt if the doctors could read patients’ mind (as well as) reah x-ray they (would not have had) to do smt. I thought the would not have had was wrong. anybody with the same answer?</p>

<p>sofiapham, you are right. “would have had” should simply be “would have”</p>

<p>For the improving paragraphs, they asked the purpose of the first sentence. Which was something like, “My teacher gave us xxxx book to read…”</p>

<p>Does anyone remember what was the purpose of that line.</p>

<p>i think i put source of his interest later on or something like that…</p>

<p>yep I bubbled the same answer though I am not pretty good in reading passages. So need a confirmation.</p>

<p>my improving paragraph answers were
source of his interest
i was eager to read more of <em>the author</em>'s
i did not really want to read the book because i thought i would not like it
the heroes who over came conventional obstacles and with whom i can identify
while she was watching a movie or smt, she decided she could write a better story so she turned off the tv …</p>

<p>i think i pretty much got what you got … what did everyone else get for the ‘heroes’ one?</p>

<p>same
that one is pretty straightforward i guess?</p>

<p>for the butterfly one what does the “anyone” emphasize?
i put comprehensive scope of his skepticism…</p>

<p>zytcan me too</p>

<p>What were the options for the anyone question???
I think they were bitterness, skepticism, …anyone?</p>

<p>@zytcan same as me
@sofiapham I also answer the source of interest.</p>

<p>This time I answer many Qs similar to many people, hope my score will improved T^T</p>

<p>just as _ so is correct</p>

<p>I am confident with this Question because I tried to memorize it for June SAT. I cannot forget it. it run in my mind all time-Just as…so (too).</p>

<p>For the butterfly…
Is the anyone bitterness??</p>

<p>butterfly is last year’s experimental section,the man visit old grandmas too, so I did these 2 section again,only a section about construction was new to me,luckily it was easy.</p>

<p>i chose skepticism too,I think D is too extreme.</p>

<p>do any of you remember what you got for the tone of Adrian Wenner in the butterflies one? there was ‘dismissive’ and something else i dont remember …</p>

<p>anyone remembers the sentence about Hamlet? I picked ‘suggested to search’ cuz I thought it was suggested searching or sth, ‘suggested to’ did not make sense to me :(</p>