<p>**Decision: Accepted **</p>
<p>Objective</p>
<p>SAT I (breakdown): Super score 2210 (three tries) - CR 800, M 710, W 700
SAT II (place score in parentheses): Lit (740), Math 1 (720), Math 2 (640 =.=)
IB (place score in parentheses): Total 41/2 out of 45 HL: Eng lit (7), Economics (7), Philosophy (6), Mandarin Chinese B (6), SL: Environmental science (6/7), Maths (6), TOK A, EE A.
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Won 4th overall debater at international public speaking + debating championship (was in the finals), lots of random national debate awards / best speaker awards.</p>
<p>Subjective</p>
<p>Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses):
- LGBTQ+, gender, racial inclusivity advocacy group (Founder, organizer junior year)
- School debating society (Debater - 4 years, Captain+President - 3 years)
- Student council (Chair - 1 year, Assistant chair - 1 year, Liaison - 1 year), founded green council in school
- Inter-school debating organization organizing biannual charity tournaments for students (Co-chair - 1 year, organizer - 2 years)
- HK national debating and public speaking squads - selected to represent HK in national team, training once a week for 4-5 months each year (Member of public speaking squad - 2 years, went to international tournaments, member debating squad - 1 year, still occuring)
- Other assorted activities over the years, some literary magazine things, playing the flute etc.</p>
<p>Job/Work Experience:
- Worked as an intern for two summers - one a random technology R&D centre (as a PR intern) just for the work experience, one for a non profit organization helping companies become more LGBT friendly.</p>
<p>Volunteer/Community Service:
- Volunteer debating teacher for various organizations over the years, service-y things incorporated into many of my ECAs (raising money for NGOs and getting to know some of the people within nonprofit sectors of HK.)</p>
<p>Summer Activities:
Essays: I really liked my Common App essay. I chose the “stood up for your beliefs” essay talked about what advocacy meant to me, and why I think it’s personally important for me to be conscious of problems I have the power to impact. Also, kind of the importance of honest and critical self-reflection + not being a hypocrite when trying to solve macroscopic problems. I’ve always thought advocacy can sound kind of preachy to outsiders, and so I tried really hard to make this essay less preachy. Hope it worked!</p>
<p>Wellesley supplement talked about the Tanner Conference and turning theories into practice + importance of hands on learning, and about Michele Moody Adams (philosopher ), my love of philosophy and academic excellence. It felt fine, maybe not the most original essay ever but enthusiastic and authentic to what I think of Wellesley so I was quite satisfied with it.</p>
<p>Teacher Recommendations: One from Philosophy teacher (who I adore, super kick ass woman), knows me through Model UN and other things, most probably good. One from my Econ teacher (again, amazing intellectual, super caring woman). Econ isn’t my strongest subject but she has a lot of experience with writing recs, and I’m sure she likes me so I hope it was fine.
Counselor Rec: Written by my form tutor (who is also my English teacher), I think it was probably a little more generic but still good. My college counselor might have added things too - he definitely likes me (we have similar tastes in humor )
Interview: Was a little generic at times but fine overall. It was nice to talk to someone about Wellesley and my interviewer was lovely. We ended up talking a lot about her experiences at Wellesley and it was really useful to have another perspective at what life there might be like!</p>
<p>Other
Country (if international applicant): Hong Kong SAR
School Type: Private (international, english first language school, IB system)
Ethnicity: Chinese
Income Bracket: Upper middle? (At least in HK!)
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): none. But maybe international = money, who knows.</p>
<p>Reflection
Strengths: I thought quite a lot about how to present myself as a holistic message given the limited space for expression I had. I think my strategy concerning essays worked well. My ECAs also give people a pretty good depiction of who I am (probably something like “debater philosophy nerd activist girl”), and I liked my essays.</p>
<p>Weaknesses: Scores! My Math 2 SAT score is abysmal, and within the context of Hong Kong my IB scores / other standardized scores aren’t overwhelmingly amazing. It’s also possible given Wellesley’s small application pool that there could have been more than one person in the ED pool that fit my general archetype, which could have worked against me.</p>
<p>Why you think you were accepted/rejected: Lots of luck. I really liked Wellesley and I spent a lot of time on my application. I was super lucky with thinking of a good common app topic early in the process so I wouldn’t have to scramble for time, and because this was ED I prioritized this application above all my others. Overall: good time management and thoughtful construction!</p>
<p>Where else you have applied and/or have been accepted/rejected: ED Originally, if Wellesley didn’t fall through I would have applied ED2 to Swarthmore, then RD to Rice, Brown, Claremont McKenna and U of Sydney for backup.</p>
<p>General comments/advice/hindsight:</p>
<p>Congratulations to everyone who got in, and for those of you who were deferred or rejected - I’m 100% rooting that you get to go to a kickass school anyway. If you’re looking at this thread for advice on applications in general, I would say the no. 1 thing is making sure your entire profile gives admissions officers a coherent and appealing picture of who you are. For the common app especially, be realistic: You have a measly 650 words to tell someone who you are, so I would use that space to describe one or two core themes central to your identity, life, values, etc. Especially if you’re the kind of person who does a lot of different activities, or has quite generic stats and details on paper, use the space to really introduce yourself as an individual and help officers understand exactly what kind of person you are. Make sure you remember the purpose of the common app!! It’s not to just be funny, or to rely on cheap gimmicks, but to honestly and effectively summarize something about what makes you special in a short word limit.</p>
<p>Feel free to reach out if you want any more information, and I hope this post will be / has been informative and/or useful!</p>