<p>Decision: Rejected - CAS</p>
<p>Objective:
SAT I (breakdown M/CR/W/Essay): 2150 (720/750/680/9)
SAT I superscore (breakdown M/CR/W/Essay): ^^^ single sitting
ACT (breakdown): 33 (35M-35S-32R-29W)
ACT superscore (breakdown): ^^single sitting
SAT II (subject, score): 730 Math II, 750 SAT Biology
Unweighted/Weighted GPA: 3.7/4.0
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School doesnt rank, but with my GPA prob not high, maybe top 20%
AP/IB (place score in parentheses): AP Calculus BC (4) AB subscore (5), AP Spanish Language (3-yikes) Rest are senior year: AP Biology, AP Spanish Literature, AP Physics, AP Statistics, AP Comparative Government (self-study)
Senior Year Course Load: AP Biology, AP Spanish Literature, AP Physics, AP Statistics, AP Comparative Government (self-study)
and English Composition I and II Honors (College Credit)
Number of other ED applicants in your school: 1 other but to Wharton (that I know of – everyone is so sneaky and competitive in my school)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel, etc.): Uhh does Gold Presidential Award for Community Service count, because I put that down
Common Awards (AP Scholar, honor roll, NM things, etc.): Idk NHS and Mu Alpha Theta</p>
<p>Subjective:
Extracurriculars (name, grade levels, leadership, description): President of Science Research Club (published to NCBI 3 times with program through Rutgers University) grades 10-12; Model UN - 3 conferences grades 11-12; International Club; Freshman Soccer</p>
<p>Job/Work Experience: Research Intern at Hospital, Started my own online business at age 16
Volunteer/Community Service: >350 hours community service at hospital, 2 research papers published and 1 in progress, >200 hours local Indian Cultural Society and choreographed dances for little kiddies, taught soccer to disabled kids, and more but I dont remember right now and are kinda irrelevant imo
Summer Experience: uhh research and UMDNJ medical programs </p>
<p>Teacher Recommendation #1: AP Spanish Teacher – he really liked me and I got an A+ in that AP class soooo made sense when I asked him, even though I bombed the AP and almost cried while I took it lol</p>
<p>Teacher Recommendation #2: AP Biology and Science research advisor, she knows me really well and chose me as president after popular vote and she is also my teacher. We have fun talks about politics too so she put that in there so I think it was really good.</p>
<p>Counselor Rec: She likes me (well she liked me when she wrote it before college apps and I drove her crazy haha), but she kinda straight up told me I wouldnt get in, but I dont think would write anything less than a glowing rec.</p>
<p>Additional Info/Rec: Didnt submit</p>
<p>Interview: REALLLLYY AWESOMMME – she went to my school and so did her 3 kids and she said everything I want to do and am like is perfect for Penn and that I would do really well there and we had a whole conversation about what it was like for her to be the only asian in our school at the time and all about her kids and what theyre doing now and how 2/3 kids went to Penn and it was so great I was so happy. And then I went home to watch tv and I decided to watch Transformers for whatever reason and like half of it was set at Penn I started crying I was like THIS IS A SIGN FROM THE LORD, but yeah it was awesome :)</p>
<p>Writing (Subject, 1-10 rating, details):
Why Penn: 9; about my visit, super personal and passionate, dropped a little humor in there but I had a hard time saying everything I love about Penn without it seeming kinda listy, but hopefully it turned out nicely.</p>
<p>Any dual-degree program essays: Nope – CAS
CommonApp Essay: 9; transition from childhood to adulthood, it was funny and showed a lot about me as person and how ive been like that since a young age and how Ive changed over time and how things have affected me and changed me etc, etc.</p>
<p>Im not a great writer, but these turned out surprisingly well because I wrote like 45 drafts for each one and showed all my family members etc. My friend didnt like my commonapp (even though like everyone else I showed did, but this is my best friend so I think she would be more honest with me) but I still sent them in because I was proud of my work :)</p>
<p>Other:
Date Submitted App: November 11th (last day because commonapps a b*tch; seriously whats more dysfunctional: the commonapp, the US government, or my life?)
U.S. State/Territory or Country: NJ
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Indian (part Iranian)
Gender: Female
Income Bracket Range: 190k ish
Hooks (URM, first generation, recruited athlete, development): None</p>
<p>Reflection
Strengths: ECs and essays
Weaknesses: everything else
Were else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Rutgers (CAS, Engineering, and Business), NJIT (Honors College & 7yearmed interview), USciences (Honors, Presidential Scholarship, and 8yearmed interview)
What would you have done differently?: Worked harder for my grades in school :(</p>
<p>Other Factors: Uhmm I have AD/HD but I only dropped it in my interview … but yeah I didnt say it anywhere else because I didnt know whether or not that could be used against me in some way. I hope this might have explained my struggle with my grades instead of showing that I have issues.</p>
<p>Im really upset right now and I didnt expect to get accepted at all, but I was hoping for at least a deferral. But good Luck everyone else!!! You all deserve happiness, great schools, and success in life – I wish you all the best!</p>