Decision: Rejected - CAS
Note: I wrote this before the decisions came out to remove any bias. I will add small tidbits, but most of this is pre-decision.
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown M/CR/W/Essay): N/A
SAT I superscore (breakdown M/CR/W/Essay): N/A
ACT (breakdown): 35C (36E, 34M, 35R, 34S), 8/12 essay (1 sitting)
ACT superscore (breakdown): see above
SAT II (subject, score): Spanish w/ Listening (800), Literature (710)
Unweighted/Weighted GPA: 3.77/4 UW(bad freshman year… I know). 4.47 W
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 15/430 (hardest course load in the school helps my low UW)
AP/IB (place score in parentheses): Calc AB (5), Calc BC(5), US History(5), Spanish Language(5), English Language (4… very salty, had the highest essay avg. in the school of 8.27), Euro History (4), Biology (4), Physics 1 (4), Environmental Science (4)
Senior Year Course Load: AP Physics 2, AP Stats, AP Lit, AP US Gov, AP Macro, AP Micro, AP Chem, Honors Accounting (lol)
Number of other ED applicants in your school: 3 others, 4 total. We all applied to different programs.
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel, etc.): Nothing national, two-time winner of the state-wide Apps4VA initiative. Sophomore year: Project won for making an application analyzing economic factors on educational quality across the counties of VA. junior year my project won for making an application looking at whether counties in VA use abstinence-only or comprehensive sexual education programs and how that affects teen pregnancies, abortions, STIs, etc.
Common Awards (AP Scholar, honor roll, NM things, etc.): National AP Scholar, NHRP, NM Commended, won two local essay contests, one on why financial literacy is important to teenagers (used as a scholarship for a dual enrollment econ class), one about the importance of the elderly in society.
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (name, grade levels, leadership, description): Economics Club (Founder and President), NHS, SNHS, Debate, Youth Group (President for 3 years), 2 research projects listed in awards (project manager). Actor, have been in 2 local short films, several commercials, and several professional theater productions.
Started a financial literacy workshop program for Hispanic ESL students at a disadvantaged school in my area.
Job/Work Experience: Intern/Financial Analyst for an Economic Consulting Firm during summer between junior and senior year, worked with corporate mergers and litigation. Also worked at Chick-fil-A for 2 years (my pleasure) (lmao)
Volunteer/Community Service: Run / participate in many projects through youth group, ESL financial literacy workshop program is my “big” CS project.
Summer Experience: Internship above, summer camps, nothing major.
Teacher Recommendation #1: 10/10 APUSH teacher, talked about how I would challenge him on everything but did so in a way that made me sound very intelligent and curious to learn.
Teacher Recommendation #2: 9/10 AP Lang teacher, talked about how I’m an excellent writer and a creative thinker, etc. etc.
Counselor Rec: 7/10, generic for a class of 430 students, but she likes me and knows about some of my big achievements.
Additional Info/Rec: N/A
Interview: 6/10. I applied to Huntsman, and got a Wharton grad. We didn’t have too much in common, and we talked about acting for a really long time.
Writing (Subject, 1-10 rating, details):
Why Penn: 7/10 - used a metaphor about a train of thought, clever and curious, but didn’t talk about my personality.
Any dual-degree program essays: Huntsman, 6.5/10. Very rushed, good writing but nothing phenomenal.
CommonApp Essay: 8/10 - metaphor about windows, perspective, systems, and curiosity. May have been too similar to my why Penn essay.
Other:
Date Submitted App: November 1st… smh
U.S. State/Territory or Country: Virginia
School Type: Mid/large public
Ethnicity: Hispanic
Gender: M
Income Bracket Range: Pell-grant
Hooks (URM, first generation, recruited athelete, development): URM, Pell grant eligible.
Reflection
Strengths: ECs (i thought), act, hooked, course rigor.
Weaknesses: Essays (i guess), interview, GPA.
Were else were you accepted/deferred/rejected:
What would you have done differently?: written an essay about my personality rather than my intellectual interests. Idk. Not too happy, but looking forward to submitting other apps.
Good luck to everyone deferred/rejected, and congrats to anyone who is class of 2022!