Omg Plz Help Me Edit My Common App Essay

<p>I just finished a first draft of my common app essay. It isn't phenomenal in any way but I'm looking for someone to help me edit it and give me some feedback. I'm open to having anyone edit it as long as they aren't applying to college this year. Someone already in college or someone with some experience would be excellent! Post here or PM me and I will get a copy over to you! THANKS</p>

<p>You can PM me.</p>

<p>ill be more than happy to read it.
be sure to include the prompt</p>