Optional essay - look over? :)

<p>I wrote my optional essay as a creative essay. I'm a bit worried that since it's "creative" per se, it might not wholly reflect my personality.</p>

<p>Would anybody just quickly read it over and let me know if it's suitable? :)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>I wouldn’t share my application materials if I were you…</p>

<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine.</p>

<p>pm me and ill give u some feedback!</p>

<p>pm it to me!</p>

<p>Hi nebbalish! I can take a look at it if you want - I applied SCEA and sent off the rest of my RD applications about a week ago, so you don’t need to worry about me copying your ideas (not that I would ever do that anyway ;)).</p>