Optional essay too daring?

<p>I really took a big roll of the dice with my optional essay for the Harvard supplement, since I chose to talk about ideologies and morals (PM for the actual essay)...to some it sounds slightly arrogant (although I add phrases to maintain levelheadedness), but the only other alternative for me would have been to talk about something that really brown-noses to the adcoms. Am I right in keeping it real or should I have bitten the bullet and done a more conventional and uplifting essay?</p>

<p>Just wondering, that's all (I sent the app in already).</p>

<p>it's hard to say without seeing the essay
PM it?</p>

<p>PM sent (10char)</p>

<p>I was facing a similar problem and I went with the "real", but I have to agree with crosscurrent: depends on the actual essay.</p>

<p>PM sent 10char</p>

<p>yeah, really depends on how it was executed and whether it's substance or sounds like fluff. no way to judge unless I see it</p>

<p>My Stanford essay was about my stance on current immigration policies and what I've done in support of my beliefs (I know, totally taboo to talk about religion and politics) and I still got in. I think as long as it represents who you are, and demonstrates something about your character, it'll be fine.</p>

<p>It was your discretion to send it in, thus I'm assuming you made the right choice. Most definitely it won't (or shouldn't) be the make-or-break point. That being said, you've really sparked my curiosity; I'd love to take a look</p>

<p>At least, it's YOU who'll get accepted/rejected. Hence, correct decision.</p>

<p>If the admissions officers wanted political opinions, they'd be watching a pundit show or listening to the radio, where they can hear experts debate. I agree with Missy Jo - the most important thing is that it highlights your personal qualities.</p>

<p>It definitely highlights the latter, but I've been accused of being a "raging [insert extreme political advocate]" by someone...so PM sent.</p>

<p>Hey, piccolojunior, I'd be more than happy to glance over your essay.
Don't hesitate to send it my way.</p>