Original CommonApp Essay? You be the Judge!

<p>Hey, I'm looking for people (not c/o 09) to critique my commonapp essay.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>PM me, I will probably finish reading it tmr and send you some feedbacks cuz it's kinda late now.. and no I'm not even applying to US schools but a Canadian student applying for scholarships</p>

<p>PM me if you want to. Will comment</p>