<p>Since no students seem to want to help, and I trust parents more anyway, would any of like to edit my college essay? Just give me your email address and I can email it to you or I can send it to you in a message. Thanks!</p>
<p>Parents PLEASE* edit my essay… Show some respect</p>
<p>Sorry, I thought one please was sufficient.</p>
<p>Trust me, you’ll feel better about your essay if you do it yourself.</p>
<p>I did do it myself. It is completely finished. I just want some opinions on it, that’s all.</p>
<p>But what would you do with the opinions?</p>
<p>Take them into consideration to perhaps make my essay even better?</p>
<p>I noticed that in the admissions forum, students usually ask people to read their essay rather than asking them to edit it.</p>
<p>Maybe the word “edit” makes folks skittish.</p>