My teachers are saying its good, but now im notnsure if theyre telling the truth since my parents dont like my essay. Could i please have some honest readers?
What were the specific reasons your parents cited for not likely your essay?
Also, what were the specific reasons your teachers cited for liking it?
Pm me it
Sure, I’ll tell you if it’s good or not. PM it.
I’ll look over it if you want
I’ll take a look
pm me
I almost always side with parents.
But if your teachers, who do this year after year after year, say it’s good, then why ask for opinions from kids online? Trust the professionals-- that’s why you gave them your essay to read in the first place.
So, what’s the tally so far? My vote was that you wrote a good essay, but I understand why your parents either didn’t like it or thought you could do better.
I can take a look if you still need more people x
I can if you still need it.
By the way, don’t send it to high school kids.
I can read if you want, I am good at spotting redundancy
Thank you everyone for your help! And just as a side note, if I didn’t send you my essay it just means that you already read my essay in the past and probably didnt recognize my username from before.