<p>It's certainly not polished yet, but i don't really think it's that bad. It is sort of personal, and in a very different tone than most essays. Would anyone like to give their opinion?</p>
<p>Would like to help. :) PM me</p>
<p>sure ill check it out. send a PM</p>
<p>i'll read and give a critique. pm me</p>
<p>this sounds funny. ill read it</p>
<p>i will read it. just pm me.</p>
<p>I'd like to read it. send it over</p>
<p>i will! :)</p>
<p>You should try being more self confident, if your parents don’t like you essay so what? There are 6.5 billion on the world that may like you essay, don’t care what others think, believe what you want to believe. With respect to your new or different tone, new things can’t harm the world.</p>