<p>Hey, does anyone want to critique my Penn pg. 217 auto-bio? I would prefer people not applying to the University of Pennsylvania, unless of course you already sent your application in. I'm willing to swap essays if anyone needs a read. Post here or PM me! Thanks.</p>
<p>im not applying there so u can send it to me if u want. Also supply the prompt too. Pm it over</p>
<p>I sent it in. I’ll look at it.</p>
<p>i can take a look at it! pm it over :]</p>
<p>Not applying to Penn, but would love to read yours :).</p>
<p>So I’ve revised my essay and I think it’s almost ready for submission. I just need a few more readers, if anyone is willing. </p>
<p>I also have my Penn communities essay if anyone wants to give that a read through. I’ve had it finished for a while, but I could always use one more opinion. </p>
<p>As I said before, I’m willing to swap essays if that will make you more eager to read mine! Thanks again!</p>
<p>Want to swap then? Read my communities essay and I’ll read one of yours? PM me</p>
<p>Already applied if you wanna PM it</p>
<p>I’m not applying if you want to PM it. :)</p>